支招小作文(163) I 动态柱 澳洲六个城市的水库水位变化

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November 2, 2023

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[2023/ 10/28] The chart below shows the water levels in reservations in six cities in Australia in October 2009 and October 2010.







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按照时间分段


【开头段】


The bar chart compares six Australian cities in terms of water levels of reservoirs in October 2009 and October 2010 .


【概述段】



Overall
, Brisbane had the highest water level of reservoir among all the cities in both years.
Also
, except the water level in Sydney, the figures in all the other five cities showed a rising trend.


思路要点：

- Brisbane的水库水位两年都最高

- 除了Sydney，其他城市的水位都上升


【Body 1】


In 2009, the water level in Brisbane
ranked the top
among these cities(98%),
followed by
the figure in Perth(80%) and that in Melbourne(78%).
By contrast
, the water level in Darwin
was the lowest
(36%), which was roughly
half of
the figure in Gold Coast.

思路要点：2009年

- Brisbane水位排第一，Perth和Melbourne分别排名第二、第三

- Darwin水位最低，大约是Gold Coast的一半


【Body 2】


In the subsequent year,
there emerged a marginal growth by
2% in the water levels of reservoirs in Brisbane, Perth and Darwin. The water levels in Melbourne and Gold Coast
also

experienced an upward trend
, with the figures rising considerably by 5%.
By contrast
, Sydney was the only city where the water level of reservoir
dropped significantly
from 44% in 2009 to 40% in 2010.


思路要点：2010年

- Brisbane, Perth and Darwin的水位小幅度上升

- Melbourne和Gold Coast 的水位显著上升

-只有Sydney的水位显著下降




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