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支招小作文(161) I 动态柱图不同年龄段花费对比

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October 12, 2023

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[2023/ 10/ 7] The chart shows the expenditure in three categories as the proportion of the total spending by UK citizens in 2004 according to their age.

【主体段分段】：
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【开头段】

The bar chart compares five age groups in terms of their expenditure on three different items in the year 2004.

【概述段】

It is noticeable that
the largest proportion of spending was on entertainment among people younger than 75, while the oldest age group spent more on food and drinks.

思路要点：

- 75岁以下的人：entertainment花费最高

- 75+的人：food and drinks花费最高

【Body 1】

People younger than 74 years old
spent more on
entertainment than other two items, with the figures ranging from 11%(by the under 30s) to 17%(by the 64-74-year-olds).
However
, for people older than 75, they only spent 6% on this category.
Although

the least percentage
of money(6%) was spent on food and drinks by people under 30, people of other age groups
chose to spend a higher percentage of money on
this item.
Obviously
, the cost of foods by the oldest age group
ranked the first place
among all the age groups, with the figure of 17%.

思路要点：绿色+蓝色

- 绿色（entertainment ）：

- 74岁之前：都最高，数值范围从11%到17%

- 75+：只有6%

- 蓝色（food and drinks)：

- under 30只有6%, 其他年龄组的人花费较高

- 在75+：所有年龄组中在这个方面花费最高，为17%

【Body 2】

It is also clear that
the youngest group
spent more money on
restaurant and hotel than other age groups, with the figure of roughly 9%.
By contrast
, only 4% of money was spent on this item by people over 75 years old, which was
the smallest
among all the expenditure by this group of people. People of the other three age groups
shared the same figure
in the spending on this aspect, at 6%.

思路要点：红色（restaurant and hotel）

- under 30：红色的比例是所有年龄组中最大的（9%）

- 75+：4%，是这个年龄组中花费最少的比例

- 其他3个年龄组的人在此方面花费比例相同（6%）