支招小作文(162) I 地图 公园变迁图
October 26, 2023
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[2023/ 10/21] The maps below show the Riverside Park in 2010 and the Riverside Park now.
【主体段分段】:
一图一段
【开头段】
The maps compare the layout of Riverside Park in 2010 and now.
【概述段】
In general
, the park has witnessed remarkable changes, and more leisure facilities have been constructed.
思路要点:
- 整个区域变化大
- 休闲功能区增多
【Body 1】
In the initial year, we can see that
in the northern side of the park, a river flew from the west to the east.
To the south of it
, another river ran from the northeast to the southwest,
with
a toilet lying to the western side. In
the southwestern corner
of the park, there were some trees and some car parks. On the eastern side, a heritage railway traveled through the park from the north to the south.
思路要点:2010 年(一般过去时)
- 公园北面,有一条西→东的河
- 在它南边有另一条东北→西南走向的河,这条河西边有一个toilet
- 公园的西南角,一些树和一些停车场
- 公园最东边,有一条南北走向的heritage railway
【Body 2】
At present, we can find that
in the northern part, a cycle path has been built to the southern bank of the river.
Looking at the southern part
,
there were no changes
to
the previous toilet, trees and car parks.
Besides
, a cafe, some swings, sports fields and a station
have appeared
to the western side of the river,
with
a
newly constructed
parking and hotel located to the opposite side.
思路要点:
- 北面河流的南岸,新建了一条cycle path
- 南边原来的toilet、trees和car parks没变化
- 南边河流的西边,新增了swings, sports fields 和一个station;河对岸新建了一个parking和hotel
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