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支招小作文(223) I 动态柱欧洲六个国家清洁能源使用比例

zuiw 2025-04-21 资讯

April 20, 2025

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The chart below shows information about fuel used in transport sector in 6 EU countries, compared to the average.

主体段分段：按照 <趋势> 分段

Body 1：EU average，Poland、Spain、Greece【上升趋势】

Body 2：Slovakia、Austria、France【下降、平稳】

开头段

The bar chart compares the proportion of sustainable energy used for transport across six European countries, comparing each country's usage with the European average in 2009 and 2010.

概述段

It is clear that on average
, European nations
increased
their renewable energy usage,
while
Slovakia and Austria
experienced declines
.
Besides
, Greece was the only country that
consistently had lower level of
consumption than the European average.

思路要点：

- European average数值上升，但Slovokia和Austria数值下降

- 只有Greece两年数值都低于European average

Body paragraph 1

The European average of renewable energy usage in transport
increased marginally
from 4.2% in 2009 to 4.9% in 2010.
This rising trend was also observed in
Poland, Spain, and Greece.
Among them
, Spain
saw the most significant rise
,
with
its renewable energy consumption
reaching the EU average
by 2010. Poland’s usage
surpassed
the average level
in both years
,
climbing slightly
from 5% to 6%
during the given period
.
In contrast
, Greece
consistently had the lowest figures
,
with
its sustainable energy consumption
growing modestly to
2% in 2010.

思路要点：EU average，Poland、Spain、Greece

- EU average：2009年为4.2%→小幅度上升到2010年达到4.9%

- Poland、Spain、Greece数值也上升

- Spain：上升最显著，2001年数值和EU average持平

- Poland：两年数值都超过EU average，从5%小幅度上升到6%

- Greece：两年数值都最低，小幅度上升到2010年达到2%

Body paragraph 2

However
, the remaining three countries
experienced a different pattern
in their consumption of renewable energy.
Although
the energy consumption in Slovakia
dropped significantly
to 7.8% in 2010, it
topped the list
in both years. The figure in Austria
also
decreased,
falling remarkably to
5.1% in 2010,
slightly above
the EU average for the same year.
Meanwhile
, France
maintained stable
usage at 6.1% across both years.

思路要点：其余三个国家

- 其余三个国家数值趋势不同

- Slovakia：数值大幅度下降到2010年的7.8%，但两年内数值都最高

- Austria：数值也下降，到2010年达到5.1%，轻微超过EU average

- France：数值保持平稳在6.1%

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